Be Heartfelt
"I didn't know what I was going to say. How do you tell someone that their child is dead?" (Krakauer 210)
Family Matters.
Sam. Charlie was your blood as well as theirs. You have got to be feeling a lot of emotions right now, so when you tell then about the death of Charlie think about yourself getting the news for the first, about how you felt. this is not a subject to talk about lightly so do your best to be as sensitive about it as you can. But most of all be as heartfelt about it as you can. the more you acknowledge the pain of the news and the more they can see that you do, shall make it easier for them as well as for you.
Incorrect: "I didn't know what I was going to say. How do you tell someone that their child is dead?" (Krakauer 210)
ReplyDeleteCorrect: "I didn't know what I was going to say. How do you tell someone that their child is dead?" (Krakauer 210). (*Period at the end.)
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